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Journo riting skillz
Posted: Tue May 25, 2021 12:28 pm
by Torquemada 1420
This from HRH Jake on PR:
Champions Cup Team of the Tournament
2 Julien Marchand (Toulouse): Despite missing the final due to suspension, Marchand is the complete footballer, with a peerless set-piece and some serious gas in the loose. Paul Boudehent was in the middle of a massive La Rochelle scrummaging effort, whilst Peato Mauvuka deputised well for Marchand and deserves a shout out for his solid display in the final.
I'll leave you to spot the error.
Boudehent is a flanker (not even an 8 so not in the middle by any viewpoint). One assumes he meant Pierre Bourgarit. A case of PMt?
Re: Journo riting skillz
Posted: Wed May 26, 2021 10:14 am
by Niegs
I'd say there's more of an issue with the line that starts "Despite missing the final due to suspension..." and then talking about him being the "complete footballer". His suspension should have nothing to do with his abilities. Say something like "Due to suspension, his presence will be sorely missed, because Marchand is the complete footballer."
Re: Journo riting skillz
Posted: Wed May 26, 2021 10:22 am
by tabascoboy
Bit of an aside but I read today in a local newspaper that a council leader had "formerly resigned" - they meant "formally" of course. Makes my blood boil, truly it does...
Re: Journo riting skillz
Posted: Wed May 26, 2021 6:43 pm
by Niegs
tabascoboy wrote: Wed May 26, 2021 10:22 am
Bit of an aside but I read today in a local newspaper that a council leader had "formerly resigned" - they meant
"formally" of course. Makes my blood boil, truly it does...
Must OF really set you off then, eh?
(... Dog help us when the dictionary people say it's acceptable to write that instead of have / 've!)
Re: Journo riting skillz
Posted: Wed May 26, 2021 6:45 pm
by tabascoboy
Niegs wrote: Wed May 26, 2021 6:43 pm
tabascoboy wrote: Wed May 26, 2021 10:22 am
Bit of an aside but I read today in a local newspaper that a council leader had "formerly resigned" - they meant
"formally" of course. Makes my blood boil, truly it does...
Must OF really set you off then, eh?
(...
Dog help us when the dictionary people say it's acceptable to write that instead of have / 've!)
I have no doubt it will happen some day, and then I shall be truly incandescent with rage.
Re: Journo riting skillz
Posted: Thu May 27, 2021 8:13 am
by Torquemada 1420
tabascoboy wrote: Wed May 26, 2021 10:22 am
Bit of an aside but I read today in a local newspaper that a council leader had "formerly resigned" - they meant
"formally" of course. Makes my blood boil, truly it does...
"5 items or less"...........
Re: Journo riting skillz
Posted: Thu May 27, 2021 8:33 am
by tabascoboy
Torquemada 1420 wrote: Thu May 27, 2021 8:13 am
tabascoboy wrote: Wed May 26, 2021 10:22 am
Bit of an aside but I read today in a local newspaper that a council leader had "formerly resigned" - they meant
"formally" of course. Makes my blood boil, truly it does...
"5 items or less"...........

Re: Journo riting skillz
Posted: Thu May 27, 2021 10:40 am
by Niegs
tabascoboy wrote: Thu May 27, 2021 8:33 am
Torquemada 1420 wrote: Thu May 27, 2021 8:13 am
tabascoboy wrote: Wed May 26, 2021 10:22 am
Bit of an aside but I read today in a local newspaper that a council leader had "formerly resigned" - they meant
"formally" of course. Makes my blood boil, truly it does...
"5 items or less"...........
As someone who doesn't have the best grammar at times, and yet who was qualified to teach English, I sometimes notice newcomers whose command of the language is better because, I think, they've been trained properly. Grammar education where I grew up was virtually non-existent (except for Gr. 11 when my English-born teacher got so fed up with us that he added some in periodically!)
Anyway, I think that was the reason this Asian-owned grocery store in Victoria has this sign, whereas all the big domestic chains use 'or less'. I can honestly say I've never seen that before here, so of course snapped a picture.
